Topic > Personal Narrative: My Loving Girl - 668

It's another dark and rainy day on this depressing island as we sit here crying and wallowing in our own misery. We have been here for countless days and endless nights. I ask myself, “how did we get here,” and she asks every day, “Is he going to die?” All I know is that we have to get away from this peninsula of melancholy, this fortress of pain. I think out loud to myself "Can anyone save us from this loneliness from the outside world?" Allow me to introduce myself, my name is CJ. I'm the average teenager with a normal life but a crazy story. It all began one scorching morning at the end of August. I met a girl named Mary Doe, who was very special because she was my girlfriend. I first met her in elementary school in the playground and we started to hate each other, but throughout elementary and middle school we always had the same classes together until we got to high school where I realized that the I really loved it and it sucked that I couldn't see her as often. I gathered some confidence and asked her out freshman year and we were a unit until now, in our senior year of high school we were so close, at least until we were on our own. We argue and fight with two male males, constantly banging our heads. This girl was also an interesting girl. She had long golden hair that shone brighter than the sun at midday. She had long, thin legs, crystal blue eyes, and caramel skin. She is everything I do and don't want in life, so she's like my contradiction, but unfortunately I love her. “Hurry up, you irrelevant fool,” he said. “Don't rush me, little beast. I'm getting really tired of you calling me names. Because you can't act like a normal girl, instead you act like a... half-paper... Rey. I look at the men's stern faces in their eyes, not out of fear but out of determination that I would get me and Mary Doe out of this place, no matter what. I look left, then right, then grab Mary Doe's hand and start running down the narrow path into the building like a bull seeing red. Mary Doe screams, "Oh my God, hurry CJ, they're coming." "Listen here, woman I run as fast as I can." I replied panting heavily. The men in blue along with the mysterious man who approached were hot on our heels as if they were greyhounds racing around a track so I guess you could say we were the chased mechanical rabbit. We finally ducked around the corner into a room without our knowledge. We hid in the room while our pursuers went around looking for us. We sat down to catch our breath and to finally figure out how to get out of here when suddenly, BEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!