Name Bunni Peterson-Haitwas ID #. 860180587 Course Number Formal Persuasive Outline March 03, 2014 SPECIFIC PURPOSE: I want my audience to feel that partial bite marks are not a reliable way to identify a suspect. QUESTION: Partial bite marks should not be entered into evidence. INTRODUCTION ATTENTION GETTING DEVICE: Imagine a person with a smile similar to yours killed someone and the only evidence the forensic dentist had was a bite mark on a victim, they also had other evidence linking you to the scene crime because it was a place where you visited frequently. Since the only two pieces of evidence they have are the ones that connect you there, the authorities turn their attention to you and now you are their only suspect. The police say your teeth are identical to the victim's bite and they plant evidence and now you are sent to prison to serve a life sentence. You know you are not guilty but because the dentist was wrong and swore before the court that the brand belonged to you. What would you do? How could you prove your innocence if they stopped looking for the criminal? All because you have a similar smile to another person.CREDIBILITY: I choose this topic because over the years I have heard of cases where someone was wrongly convicted and I think there should be an established standard for how evidence is collected evidence and that it should not be based only on an educated guess. JUSTIFICATION: In researching the possibilities that bite marks can be misidentified, I have found that analysis is not always an accurate way to identify the suspect, that being said I think we should reconsider how partial bite marks are used as evidence. CLAIM: Partial bite marks should... center of paper... Rown was convicted of murder due in part to bite mark evidence, and freed after DNA testing of saliva left in the bite wounds matched someone else.[20]B. The case of Ray Krone, an Arizona man convicted of murder due to bite marks left on a woman's breast. DNA evidence later implicated another man, and Krone was released from prison. Subpoint 3 to support your main point CONCLUSION “There are simply too many variables,” said Dr. C. Michael Bowers, author of “Forensics Dental Evidence: An Investigator's Handbook,” (Bowers, 2004). SUMMARY: [Brief overview or summary of what you just talked about. You can go main point by main point]APPEAL:[Appeal to your audience. Leave a comment or a meaningful quote that they can remember, take your audience back to the introductory story, give them something to think about and move them, emotionally and physically!]
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